Dark Sonnet #2
Ominous storm clouds in my head
Unspoken words need to be said
Under siege of hostility
And I am ready to break free.
I fall to pieces in the night
Fighting through waves of dark and light
Sinking deep in turbulent sea
And I am ready to break free.
Washed up on the rock laden shore
I find the strength and close this door
A world of promise waits for me
And I am ready to break free.
Ominous storm clouds in my head,
And I am ready to break free.
Colleen Keller Breuning © 2021
January 22, 2021
Yeah, I know…sorry for two dark sonnets two weeks in a row. Clearing some clutter and stress from my head and writing is my release. 🙂 😦
Ecrits Blogophilia Week 46.13 Topic: Writer’s Choice – Break Free
Hard Bonus (2 points): Writer’s Choice – Incorporate a Patsy Cline lyric (“I fall to pieces”)
Easy Bonus (1 Point): Writer’s Choice – Include a turbulent sea
SECRET PHRASE GUESSES:
1. Bear with me
2. Out of hibernation
3. Hungry Mama Bear
4. Not out of the woods
5. Yogi Bear and Boo Boo
6. Smokey the Bear
7. The bear/bare necessities
8. Black Bear on the loose
9. What’s for dinner?
10. Snack attack
I love how you show a ray of sunshine from within. Enjoyed the post.
Thanks, always have to hold out for hope that there will be better days ahead! ❤
Magnificent… These are dark days.
Great poem, C.B.
Yes they are, my friend….with COVID and all the unrest in the country it is very dark. Hoping for brighter days! ❤
Just what I needed to see and hear today – thank you my friend!
Thank you, friend!!!!! So wonderful to see you here. It’s been a very difficult year and 2021 isn’t starting out too well with COVID-19 spiking and all the unrest!! Love ya! ❤
It will soon blow over.
We can only hope… it gets overwhelming at times!
Writing it out, is always a good way to clear it out. Well done as always.
Thank you, Rebecca. Writing always helps me purge the darkness and stress. I know you can relate! Hugs ❤
And this rainy day here just adds to the darkness.
Here’s hoping for brighter, sunny days for us all! ❤
No apologies please: Always enjoy it when you go dark
Thank you, taking a walk on the dark side is very therapeutic for me! ❤
Love the way you express yourself Colleen. There is a catharsis in your words and their process. It heals us all. xo
(I posted this in the wrong spot and have no idea how to delete. Have I mentioned how much I dislike wordpress. lol)
Thank you – I think we’re all feeling the stress with everything that’s happened in the past year. Writing is cathartic and therapeutic for me!!!! Glad you found this healing! ❤
I hope we are all breaking free. 8 points Earthling
Me too, thanks for the points! ❤