In the Shallows

In the Shallows

No
promise

is ever
unbreakable
hollow words echoed
cutting deep as a knife
I struggled against darkness
haunting voices of the afreet
inner demons taunting, pushing me
beyond the rocky shore, torn and tattered
I was drowning in the shallows of life
angry clouds parted as the storm ebbed
on my knees, I crawled to the light
spilling warmth on my cold skin
your spirit touching mine
I had found new faith
you healed my heart
held me safe
in your
arms

Colleen Keller Breuning © 2021
May 21, 2021

Inspired once again by Moby ~ “The Sky is Broken”

Ecrits Blogophilia Week 10.14 Topic: No Promises
Hard Bonus (2 points): Quote Denzel Washington (“I had faith.”)
Easy Bonus (1 Point): Use the word “afreet” (Per Merriam-Webster: a powerful evil jinni, demon, or monstrous giant in Arabic mythology)

This week’s cute pic

Secret Bonus Guesses:

  1. Pied Piper
  2. Kitten/cat charmer
  3. Stray cat strut
  4. Flute player
  5. Childhood buddies
  6. Street music
  7. Serenade on the stoop
  8. Singing for your supper
  9. Music to my ears
  10. Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle

Topic: Irene   Pic:  Lika 

13 Comments

  1. From the darkness to the light. 8 points Earthling

  2. Always a wonderful read.

    1. Thank you dear Rebecca! ❤

  3. Michael Todd says:

    This is a brilliant account of where you are on your journey, one that is far from over.

    1. Thank you Michael! Oh I’m just taking a dip on the dark side and plugging through! Yeah I plan to live to be 100 and be around for all the good stuff with kids, grandkids, great-grandkids and family!!! ❤

  4. tylermyrth72 says:

    Love the journey you take us on in this etheree

  5. Love this Colleen. The song too. 🙂

  6. Dia Jae says:

    Wow! Love it! 🙂

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