Downstream

Downstream

down by the water
I ponder meaning of life
lay my burden down

blue trail of sorrow
heart drops like a sinking stone
clear to the bottom

gravity defied
as I float downstream
in gentle river

washed ashore, breathless,
hands reach out in grateful skies
as a new dawn breaks

Colleen Keller Breuning © 2021
May 14, 2021

“Rushing” by Moby

Ecrits Blogophilia Week 9.14 Topic: By the Water
Hard Bonus (2 points):  Include the meaning of life 
Easy Bonus (1 Point): Use the title of a song by Alison Krauss (“Lay My Burden Down,” “Blue Trail of Sorrow,” “Sinking Stone, “Gravity” and “Gentle River”)

This week’s pic

SECRET BONUS GUESSES:

  1. Down by the Water (in blog)
  2. Gentle River (in blog)
  3. Float Downstream (in blog)
  4. Slow Boat to China
  5. Paddle board
  6. Fisherman
  7. Gone Fishing
  8. Fishing Pole
  9. Fishing Hole
  10. Sail Away

Topic:  Christopher  Pic:  Stormy

8 Comments

  1. tylermyrth72 says:

    You went over the top on the Alison Krauss song titles, that is impressive in Haiku

    1. Thanks!!! Any challenge with song titles or lyrics and I get washed up in them LOL But I think that’s a good thing. 😉

  2. Irene Melgoza says:

    Love how this came together.

  3. Lovely haiku series chock full of Alison Krauss songs! 8 points Earthling!

  4. Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful Colleen xo

  5. dahliaramone says:

    Oh, this is so beautiful!! I love it xo

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