The Mourning Light
no sign of the sun
the morning is full of storm
framed by steel gray clouds
the heavens melt down
weeping angels fill the sky
shedding bitter tears
the mud and the roots
drown in relentless sorrow
shallow and hollow
restless winds of March
ruffle the raven’s feathers
ashes to stardust
sepia snapshots
the essence of life wavers
in the mourning light
Colleen Keller Breuning © 2021
March 5, 2021
Ecrits Blogophilia Week 52.13 Topic: Melt Down
Hard Bonus (2 points): Incorporate a line from a Pablo Neruda poem (The morning is full of storm; the mud and the roots)
Easy Bonus (1 Point): Include a character from Dr. Who (Weeping Angels)
Secret Phrase Guesses:
- Mad Scientist
- Kitchen Chemistry
- Weird Science
- Science Experiment
- Back to the Future
- High School Chemistry
- Test Tubes
- Wild Hypothesis
- Love Potion #9
- Crazy in Love
Topic: Christine Picture: Christopher
Sad tale here Kudos
Thank you Stormy! ❤
I like the flow of this.
Thank you Christopher! ❤
Always the way with words.
Thank you sweet friend! ❤
This one really speaks to me, sorrowful yet lovely and delicate somehow.
Thank you – I’m so sorry for the loss of your friend. Very sad – sending love and prayers of comfort. 😥 ❤
The darkness bleeding into light. 8 points Earthling
Thank you Marvin! ❤
A very lovely darkness
Ohhh! Nice!!!! I like your guesses too! 🙂
Sadness, beautifully written
Some days just suck the energy & joy out of you.